the kiss
April 3, 2008Bottle on the
table, half-filled
with water.
Thirsty Amy
approaches the
bottle.
Her lips touch
the opening and
she drinks.
Jim shows up
smiles. She has
kissed him through
The bottle of
clear mineral
water.
Structuralism Notes:
The structure of this poem is somehow derived from the example of John Donne’s metaphysical poem The Flea. In this case, the conceit is actually the bottle of water in the table that both Amy and Jim partook of. Despite the differences of the form, there are still structural similarities like the male’s will to dominate the female and the phallic symbol which is the bottle also suggest meaning to the poem.
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April 3, 2008 at 11:22pm
sweet, love the lyrical simplicity
telling a straight story
too often “poetry” gets in it’s own tangles
well done