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In two
seconds
I looked,
you saw.
Our eyes—
we met
like two
bubbles
combined.
In two
seconds
we were
just one
I give
myself
to you.
It then
ended—
pop!
pop!
In two
seconds
I lived
and died
with you.
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April 19, 2008 at 7:53pm and is filed under hobby, interest, poesy, poetry, random, retrospect, turtle journal.
Tags: eye, eyes, glance, infatuation, look, love, lust, poem, poetry, seconds, see, two
April 20, 2008 at 3:33am
poignant and erotic. i like it.